The very heart of your writing while appearing agreeable at first, did not work perfectly with me after some time. Someplace throughout the paragraphs you were able to make me a believer but only for a while. I still have got a problem with your jumps in logic and you would do nicely to help fill in all those gaps. If you actually can accomplish that, I will undoubtedly be amazed.
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The very heart of your writing while appearing agreeable at first, did not work perfectly with me after some time. Someplace throughout the paragraphs you were able to make me a believer but only for a while. I still have got a problem with your jumps in logic and you would do nicely to help fill in all those gaps. If you actually can accomplish that, I will undoubtedly be amazed.